literature

Drown

Deviation Actions

bokitybok's avatar
By
Published:
302 Views

Literature Text

My eyes filled with tears, my heart with terror, I run into the waves.  I trip and stumble over my feet, blindly in the night.  Slowly now, the shoreline recedes as I fall  beneath the waves.  My chest grows heavy... Is it the water?  Regret?  At this time I feel unsure.  Reaching up, I realize what a fool I am.  I breath in the salty water, so similar to tears.  My final thoughts shoot through my body...

Must it end like this?
100 Theme Challenge #7- Drown
© 2009 - 2024 bokitybok
Comments2
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
jambajmonster's avatar
your a very talented writer. i forgot how amazing you can be with words